Monday, 2 November 2009

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Draft and Feedback

Though my draft is very basic in colour and composition, my general theme for the poster was 'keep it simple'. Also by encouraging a more white area emphasizes the semantics of 'Doctors', white being clean and part of the hospital colour palette.


Buy having the robot on the bottom left of the page, a icon used in my digi-pak continues the theme of 'Electronic' and the robot should be then eye catching and recognized on the album.


'NEW ALBUM' is repeated twice and in two bold colours for emphasis. I also placed under each one a line of random symbols '2$%*^^*JG%^!+)*&&' representing a 'malfunction' or 'computer based symbols' to once again co-inside with the Electronical theme.


Draft



Changes made and final poster....

Taking in consideration my feedback comments, I realised the advertisement needed more colour and less white space. I still kept it simple but placed blocks of black to split up the white. I also changed the font and moved around the layout.Most importantly I still needed to include a company brand like HMV, or Virgin etc.


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2 comments:

Dr C said...

I'm not convinced by this - again I feel there's too much white space - again, see Mr Haycocks for feedback and ideas!

Dr C said...

Which is the final - compare to real examples here... Anything missing?